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I am a student at Business Administration Program.

I am a student at Business Administration Program. 1555n
Dear Sir/Madam, I am a student at Business Administration Program. In this semester, I am taking a software application course from Mr. Blinnoff. This course is a critical one to implement all knowledge I am gathering from the others courses. Therefore, I would like to attend all classes of this course. Unfortunately, I will have to go back my country for one week the next week. I am writing to request taking a week off during this course. I have received a horrible news from my aunt yesterday. My mom is a terrible health conditions and has been staying at hospital since the last couple of days. I will have to return my city to visit my mom and spend time with her at least one week. Meantime, I do not want to miss any classes of the main course. For these reason, I will be grateful to you if it is possible to provide me an another chance to take the missed classes with evening classes after I returned the city. I would like to hear from you. Sincerely, I am a student in the Business Administration Program. This semester, I am taking a software application course from Mr. Blinnoff. This course is a critical one to implement all knowledge I am gathering from the others courses. Therefore, I would like to attend all classes of this course. Unfortunately, I will have to go back to my country for one week. I am writing to request taking a week off during this course. I received terrible news from my aunt yesterday. My mom is in terrible health conditions and has been staying in the hospital for the last couple of days. I will have to return to my city to visit my mom and spend time with her for at least one week. Meantime, I do not want to miss any classes of the main course. For these reasons, I will be grateful if it is possible to provide a chance me to cover the missed classes by taking evening classes after returning to the city. I would like to hear from you. Sincerely
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am a student at Business Administration Program. In this semester, I am taking a software application
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course
from Mr.
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Blinnoff
. This
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course
is a critical one to implement all knowledge I am gathering from the others
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courses
.
Therefore
, I would like to attend all
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classes
of this
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course
. Unfortunately, I will
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have to
go back my country for one
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week
the
next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
week
. I am writing to request taking a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
week
off during this course.

I have received
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "horrible news".
a horrible news
from my aunt yesterday. My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mom
is a terrible health conditions and has been staying at hospital since the last couple of days. I will
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
return my city to visit my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mom
and spend time with her at least one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
week
. Meantime, I do not want to miss any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
of the main course.

For these reason, I will be grateful to you if it is possible to provide me
One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: "a chance" or "another chance".
an another chance
to take the missed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
with evening
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
after I returned the city.

I would like to hear from you.

Sincerely
,

I am a student in the Business Administration Program. This semester, I am taking a software application
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
from Mr.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Blinnoff
. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
is a critical one to implement all knowledge I am gathering from the others
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
.
Therefore
, I would like to attend all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. Unfortunately, I will
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
go back to my country for one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
week
. I am writing to request taking a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
week
off during this course.

I received terrible news from my aunt yesterday. My
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mom
is in terrible health conditions and has been staying in the hospital for the last couple of days. I will
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
return to my city to visit my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mom
and spend time with her for at least one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
week
. Meantime, I do not want to miss any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
of the main course.

For these reasons, I will be grateful if it is possible to provide a chance me to cover the missed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
by taking evening
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
classes
after returning to the city.

I would like to hear from you.

Sincerely
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IELTS letter I am a student at Business Administration Program.

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354 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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