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Talk about a sport or activity you usually do.

Talk about a sport or activity you usually do. nRl6g
Hi, everyone. To be honest, I have to say that I am a big fan of sport. Basically, the most popular sport in the world for example: soccer, swim, badminton. The sport I play most often is football. You know, I usually play as a striker, this is due to my football idol is MESSI. Actually, I frequently play soccer in my free afternoon with my friends and I feel so relaxed and healthy. In the past, when I was a kid I played it once in blue moon because of I didn’t play well, but now I practice regularly and get better. In the future, I hope I will still it better.
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fan of sport.
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, the most popular sport in the world
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: soccer, swim, badminton. The sport I
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play
most
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often
is football. You know, I
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as a striker, this is due to my football idol is MESSI. Actually, I
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play
soccer in my free afternoon with my friends and I feel
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relaxed and healthy. In the past, when I was a kid I played it once in blue moon
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IELTS letter Talk about a sport or activity you usually do.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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