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Apologizing to the neighbor for noise

Apologizing to the neighbor for noise LBX9p

Dear Mr. Neighbour, I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to you with regards to the complaint you made recently about the noise. First of all, I would like to apologize for the inconvenience caused but there are certain unavoidable circumstances causing the issue. As you might be knowing, the heavy rains and storms have affected many households in our neighborhood and mine as well, is one of them. The shed of the roof has undergone a great amount of damage, leaving the torn tin sheet, damaged garden, broken lights and decorations. We have called for help from the local municipal corporation and for the past two days, they have been working tirelessly in order to fix the roof before the next rains and hence, the noise of the machinery. I would like to inform you that I already had a word with them asking to speed up and get everything completed in a day or two. I apologize to you again and ask for your cooperation for another day or two. I would like to thank you in advance for your consideration. Yours Sincerely, Saikat

Dear Mr. Possible spelling mistake. 'Neighbour' is British English.Neighbor
Neighbour
,

I hope this letter finds you in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 health. I am writing to you Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".in regard towith regard toregarding
with regards to
 the complaint you made recently about the noise. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, I would like to apologize for the inconvenience caused This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there are certain unavoidable circumstances causing the issue.

As you might The verb 'knowing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
be knowing
, the heavy rains and storms have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 households in our neighborhood and mine as well
, is one of them. The shed of the roof has undergone a great amount of damage, leaving the torn tin sheet, damaged garden, broken lights and decorations.

We have called for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 from the local municipal corporation and for the past two days, they have been working tirelessly
 in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 the roof This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the next
 rains and hence
, the noise of the machinery.

I would like to inform you that I already had a word with them asking to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accelerate
speed up
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 everything completed in a day or two.

I apologize to you again and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :solicitrequest
ask for
 your cooperation for another day or two. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 would like to thank you in advance for your consideration.

Yours Sincerely
,

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Saikat