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Write a letter to an employer for a job in his/her company and describe your qualifications and skills you have.

Write a letter to an employer for a job in his/her company and describe your qualifications and skills you have. PVkbw
Dear sir, The main endeavor of my writing this letter is to apply for a part-time job as an accountant in your restaurant. I came to know about this vacancy through one of a friend who is working a full-time job in your company. I am interested in the job and would like to be a part of your organization. I have good academic knowledge in this field as well as I also have five years of work experience in accounting. I worked with renowned companies such as KFC and Pizza Hut. Apart from it, I have knowledge about Telly and busy software which is quite helpful in accounts. moreover, I have better communication skill and leadership skill. I attached my all relevant documents copies with my C. V. Please find this attachment and give me a chance to work with you. I am available Monday to Friday from 9. 00am to 5. 00pm. if possible could you please fix my working hours according to this time schedule. I also agree to do work on Saturday and Sunday excluding public holiday. It would be a great owner for me to join your organization. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully,
Dear sir,

The main endeavor of my writing this letter is to apply for a part-time job as an accountant in your restaurant. I came to know about this vacancy through one of a friend who is working a full-time job in your
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company
.

I
am interested
in the job and would like to be a part of your organization.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have
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good
academic knowledge in this field
as well
as I
also
have five years of work experience in accounting.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
worked with renowned
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
such as KFC and Pizza Hut. Apart from it, I have knowledge about
Telly
and busy software which is quite helpful in accounts.

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moreover
, I have better communication
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skill
and leadership
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skill
. I attached my all relevant documents copies with my C. V.
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Please
find this attachment and give me a chance to work with you.

I am available Monday to Friday from 9. 00am to 5. 00pm.
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if
possible could you
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please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
my working hours according to this time schedule. I
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
to do work on Saturday and Sunday excluding public holiday. It would be a great owner for me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
your organization.

I look forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter Write a letter to an employer for a job in his/her company and describe your qualifications and skills you have.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
203 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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