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You all want to do some more language training

You all want to do some more language training 66dO0
Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to thank you for organizing German language training last week. It was certainly an extraordinary experience. In fact, I and my colleagues believe that this course has helped us get familiar with the German language and its basics. Moreover, this has enabled us with confidence to interact with our German Clients like Damler and BMW without any hesitation. I can't stress enough on the fact that your decision of organizing the training has only reaped benefits. Although the training conducted was at a beginner level, we think it has been helpful in getting our basics right. Hence, I would like to suggest you that we look forward to more such trainings in coming weeks. One week of German language course has definitely made our interaction with German clients easier. However, like you already know that we have clients from various parts of the world such as Canada, France, Austria, Brazil, Chile etc. Each of these clients have a native language. I am sure that speaking their mother tongue will make our clients feel inclusive and valued. So, I request you to please arrange trainings in other languages too. If you agree with the idea, I would like to suggest that the trainings can begin early next week. All of us can spare 2 hours each day from our work schedule and attend the trainings. I also believe we should look for an auditorium which can accomodate the strength of atleast 20 people. For example, auditorium number 12 on ground floor can be leveraged based on its availability in coming weeks. If you need, I can help with the arrangements needed. I look forward to your response. Yours Sincerely, Samriddhi
Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to thank you for organizing German
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training
last
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week
. It was
certainly
an extraordinary experience. In fact, I and my colleagues believe that this course has
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helped
us
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get
familiar with the German
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language
and its basics.
Moreover
, this has enabled us with confidence to interact with our German
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Clients
like
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Damler
and BMW without any hesitation. I can't
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stress
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enough
on the fact that your decision of organizing the
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training
has
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only
reaped benefits.

Although the
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training
conducted was at a beginner level, we
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think
it has been helpful in getting our basics right.
Hence
, I would like to suggest you that we look forward to more such
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trainings
in coming
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weeks
. One
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week
of German
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language
course has definitely made our interaction with German
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clients
easier.
However
, like you already know that we have
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clients
from various parts of the world such as Canada, France, Austria, Brazil, Chile etc. Each of these
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clients
have a native
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language
. I am sure that speaking their mother tongue will
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make
our
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clients
feel inclusive and valued.
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, I request you to
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please
arrange
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trainings
in other
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languages
too.

If you
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agree
with the
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idea
, I would like to suggest that the
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trainings
can
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begin
early
next
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week
. All of us can spare 2 hours each day from our work schedule and attend the
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trainings
. I
also
believe we should look for an auditorium which can
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accomodate
the strength of
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atleast
20
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.
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ground floor
can
be leveraged
based on its availability in coming
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weeks
. If you need, I can
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help
with the arrangements needed. I look forward to your response.

Yours
Sincerely
,

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Samriddhi
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IELTS letter You all want to do some more language training

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285 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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