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A friend of yours has recently written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem at your workplace in the past. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend how you feel about the problem explain how you faced a similar situation in the past suggest possible solutions to the problem

A friend of yours has recently written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem at your workplace in the past. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend how you feel about the problem explain how you faced a similar situation in the past suggest possible solutions to the problem W1XD
Dear Mark, Hope you're doing good. I received your letter and I'm glad that you approached me as have been in a similar situation in the past. It is tough to swallow things when we don't receive good appraisals and a promotion, despite excellent performance through out the financial year. I faced the same problem a couple of years ago, where I was denied a Senior Associate position, because my senior colleagues were not promoted and I also received hikes well below industry standard. It was very disheartening and discouraging as I planned my future accordingly. To weather the storm, I raised the issue to my Manager as well as the Legal and Compliance team. They assessed my performance and presented the rewards I deserved. Keeping this in mind, if you are confident about your work then take the complaint to the next level and see if you can get desired results. I'd hope and pray that you get what you truly deserve. Best wishes, Nithin
Dear Mark,

Hope you're doing
good
. I received your letter and I'm glad that you approached me as have been in a similar situation in the past. It is tough to swallow things when we don't receive
good
appraisals and a promotion, despite excellent performance
through out
the financial year.

I faced the same problem a couple of years ago, where I
was denied
a Senior Associate position,
because
my senior colleagues were not promoted and I
also
received hikes well below industry standard. It was
very
disheartening and discouraging as I planned my future
accordingly
.

To weather the storm, I raised the issue to my Manager
as well
as the Legal and Compliance team. They assessed my performance and presented the rewards I deserved. Keeping this in mind, if you are confident about your work then take the complaint to the
next
level and
see
if you can
get
desired results.

I'd hope and pray that you
get
what you
truly
deserve.

Best wishes,

Nithin
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IELTS letter A friend of yours has recently written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem at your workplace in the past. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend how you feel about the problem explain how you faced a similar situation in the past suggest possible solutions to the problem

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
165 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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