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Write a letter to a manager ,you read an advertisement in a newspaper and apply for a job.

Write a letter to a manager, you read an advertisement in a newspaper and apply for a job. mbOXq

Dear sir, Here, I am writing this regarding to apply for a job, Which I read in a commercial add from an English newspaper ' The times newspaper' in last Sunday. As per your requirements I have done MBA in Business Administration. In addition, I have 3 years experience as a sales executive in Big Bazar. I enroll this job since 2019 from till now. In previous job I learnt a lot, Which will aid in my future. Moreover, I am good in communication skill and confidence level is also inhance due to the fact of this previously employment. I think I meet all the qualities, Which you want in a manager of your company. In the last, I attached my CV in this letter for furthermore information regarding my academic and experiences as well. I hope you are considering my skills and hire me. I wish to hear a positive response from you. Yours faithfully, Johnson.

Dear sir, Here, I am writing this The phrase 'regarding to' is not correct. Use "regarding" or "regard to".regardingregard to
regarding to
 apply for a job, Which I read in a commercial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 from an English newspaper Don't put a space on both sides of a quote symbolapply
' 
The times newspaper' in last Sunday. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 per your requirements I have done MBA in Business Administration. In addition
, I have 3 years experience as a sales executive in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
Big
Possible spelling mistake found.Bazaar
Bazar
. I enroll this job since 2019 from till This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. In previous job I Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
 a lot, Which will aid in my future. Moreover
, I am This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 in communication This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
 and confidence level is also
Possible spelling mistake found.enhance
inhance
 due to the fact of this previously employment. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 all the qualities, Which you want in a manager of your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. In the last, I attached my CV in this letter for furthermore
 information regarding my academic and experiences as well
. I hope you are considering my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and hire me. I wish to hear a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response from you. Yours faithfully
, Johnson. 