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Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: • where and when you lost your bag • what your bag looks like • what its contents were

Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: • where and when you lost your bag • what your bag looks like • what its contents were Lrw13
Dear Sir/Madam I would like to report lost luggage. I few from London to Vancouver on 26 March 2021 on flight No. LZ3SF and carrying my hand bag with me, put it in overhead bin. When I reached home, I discovered that my and bag left on the plane. It seems that at the time of de-boarding the plane I forgotten to collect my baggage. It's a red colour hand bag having two metal clips on top. It contains important documents and my medical report. These items are very important to me. I think you can imagine the significance of the luggage. Please let me know crew member and find the red colour hand bag and the procedure for claim. Inform me by a call or write to me at my email address Thanks XYZ
Dear Sir/Madam

I would like to report lost luggage. I few from London to Vancouver on 26 March 2021 on flight No. LZ3SF and carrying my hand
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bag
with me, put it in overhead bin. When I reached home, I discovered that my and
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bag
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left
on the
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plane
. It seems that at the time of
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de-boarding
the
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I forgotten to collect my baggage.

It's a red
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colour
hand
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bag
having two metal clips on top.
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It
contains
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important
documents and my medical report. These items are
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very
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important
to me. I
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think
you can imagine the significance of the luggage.
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Please
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let
me know crew member and find the red
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colour
hand
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bag
and the procedure for claim. Inform me by a call or write to me at my email
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address


Thanks

XYZ

IELTS letter Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: • where and when you lost your bag • what your bag looks like • what its contents were

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
134 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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