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Write a letter to a friend who invites you to their new home

Write a letter to a friend who invites you to their new home ew93B
Hi Emily, It is really nice of you to invite me to your new house. I was glad that we could spend some time together. Your home is decorated with different stylish paintings and green plants which made me feel calm and comfortable all the time. Also, the interior design is spacious enough, which will be great for throwing parties later. One special thing I must remember, the guestroom you prepare for my yoga in the morning was just incredible! Although I enjoyed my stay very much, I hope that I could spend a few more days at your place. I do really enjoy visiting Sydney and hope that you could show me around next time. Shall we meet again next month at your place? Please let me know whether you are available or not. I look forward to seeing you in the not-too-distant future. All the best, Cynthia
Hi Emily, It is
really
nice of you to invite me to your new
house
. I was glad that we could spend
some
time together.

Your home
is decorated
with
different
stylish paintings and green plants which made me feel calm and comfortable all the time.
Also
, the interior design is spacious
enough
, which will be great for throwing parties later. One special thing I
must
remember, the guestroom you prepare for my yoga in the morning was
just
incredible!

Although I enjoyed my stay
very
much, I hope that I could spend a few more days at your place. I do
really
enjoy visiting Sydney and hope that you could
show
me around
next
time. Shall we
meet
again
next
month at your place?
Please
let
me know whether you are available or not. I look forward to seeing you in the not-too-distant future.

All the best, Cynthia
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend who invites you to their new home

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
148 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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