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You borrowed class notes from your friend which you promised to return to him the next day. In a hurry you forget to take them to school. Write a letter of apology for not returning his notes on time. Give a reason why you could not return the notes. Apologize and tell him that it won’t happen again.

You borrowed class notes from your friend which you promised to return to him the next day. In a hurry you forget to take them to school. Write a letter of apology for not returning his notes on time. Give a reason why you could not return the notes. Apologize and tell him that it won’t happen again. peoWw

Dear Sir or madam, Please accept my sincerest apologies for forgetting to return your class notes on time. Yesterday I borrowed your class notes and committed you to return on time. However in the morning I was terrible headache so I got up late, as well as I missed my school bus. Therefore I had to commute on food to school. As a result I forgot to bring your class notes at all. When I entered the classroom I saw you and I remembered returning them for you. But it was high time to begin the lesson. Thus I could not come back my home to bring them. I was very ashamed of my action. I hope you will accept my apologies. I promise you not to do like this condition any more. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Your sincerely Muattar Xakimova

Dear Sir or madam,

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 accept my sincerest apologies for forgetting to return your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 notes on time.

Yesterday I borrowed your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 notes and committed you to return on time. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 in the morning I was terrible headache This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 up late, as well
 as I missed my school bus. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 I had to commute on food to school. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 a result I forgot to bring your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 notes at all.

When I entered the classroom I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 you and I remembered returning them for you. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 it was high time to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 the lesson. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Thus,
Thus
 I could not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back my home to bring them. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 ashamed of my action.

I hope you will accept my apologies. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 promise you not to do like this condition Did you mean the adverb "anymore"?anymore
any more
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am looking forward to hearing from you.

Your sincerely
Possible spelling mistake found.Mu attar
Muattar
Possible spelling mistake found.AsimovYakimaAkiva
Xakimova