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You borrowed class notes from your friend which you promised to return to him the next day. In a hurry you forget to take them to school. Write a letter of apology for not returning his notes on time. Give a reason why you could not return the notes. Apologize and tell him that it won’t happen again.

You borrowed class notes from your friend which you promised to return to him the next day. In a hurry you forget to take them to school. Write a letter of apology for not returning his notes on time. Give a reason why you could not return the notes. Apologize and tell him that it won’t happen again. peoWw
Dear Sir or madam, Please accept my sincerest apologies for forgetting to return your class notes on time. Yesterday I borrowed your class notes and committed you to return on time. However in the morning I was terrible headache so I got up late, as well as I missed my school bus. Therefore I had to commute on food to school. As a result I forgot to bring your class notes at all. When I entered the classroom I saw you and I remembered returning them for you. But it was high time to begin the lesson. Thus I could not come back my home to bring them. I was very ashamed of my action. I hope you will accept my apologies. I promise you not to do like this condition any more. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Your sincerely Muattar Xakimova
Dear Sir or madam,

Please
accept my sincerest apologies for forgetting to return your
class
notes on time.

Yesterday I borrowed your
class
notes and committed you to return on time.
However
in the morning I was terrible headache
so
I
got
up late,
as well
as I missed my school bus.
Therefore
I had to commute on food to school.
As
a result I forgot to bring your
class
notes at all.

When I entered the classroom I
saw
you and I remembered returning them for you.
But
it was high time to
begin
the lesson.
Thus
I could not
come
back my home to bring them. I was
very
ashamed of my action.

I hope you will accept my apologies.
I
promise you not to do like this condition
any more
.

I
am looking forward to hearing from you.

Your
sincerely
Muattar
Xakimova
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IELTS letter You borrowed class notes from your friend which you promised to return to him the next day. In a hurry you forget to take them to school. Write a letter of apology for not returning his notes on time. Give a reason why you could not return the notes. Apologize and tell him that it won’t happen again.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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