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write a letter to a sports club. Tell them to you are not satisfied with the service and have already let them know about it.

write a letter to a sports club. Tell them to you are not satisfied with the service and have already let them know about it. QKJjb

Dear sir, I am writing this letter to complain about your services which are unsatisfied. I visited your sport club on last Saturday with my colleagues and we were very disappointed with you services. In the club there were very enough activity is available which is the first thing to notice by us, and the most important was waiter services was not impressive. Many players did their work by themself there were less worker available and this was unfacility they told us already. On the second day I complanced about it, they told me that when you was come to the club we inform you before the payment. The manner was stair at me because I was argue with them. I want that you to increase your staff member and provide full facility to your customer which is more useful for you. I hope you will think about that. Yours faithfully, Namrata Sonani.

Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to complain about your services which are unsatisfied
. I visited your sport club on last Saturday with my Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).colleagues, and
colleagues and
 we were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 disappointed with you services.

In the club there were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 activity is available which is the first
 thing to notice by us, and the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 was waiter services was not impressive. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
 players did their work by The term is non-standard and not widely accepted.themselveshimselfherself
themself
 there were Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean "less work"?less work
less worker
 available and this was Possible spelling mistake found.facility
unfacility
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 us already.

On the second day I Possible spelling mistake found.comp lanced
complanced
 about it, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me that when you Use second person verb with 'you': "are" or "were".arewere
was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to the club we inform you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the payment. The manner was stair at me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I was Consider using a past participle here: "argued".argued
argue
 with them.

I Did you mean "want you to"?want you to
want that you
 to increase your staff member and provide full facility to your customer which is more useful for you.

I hope you will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about that.

Yours faithfully
, Possible spelling mistake found.NarmadaNarrateNamathInamorataAmrita
Namrata
Possible spelling mistake found.Sonali
Sonani
. 