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write a letter to a sports club. Tell them to you are not satisfied with the service and have already let them know about it.

write a letter to a sports club. Tell them to you are not satisfied with the service and have already let them know about it. QKJjb
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to complain about your services which are unsatisfied. I visited your sport club on last Saturday with my colleagues and we were very disappointed with you services. In the club there were very enough activity is available which is the first thing to notice by us, and the most important was waiter services was not impressive. Many players did their work by themself there were less worker available and this was unfacility they told us already. On the second day I complanced about it, they told me that when you was come to the club we inform you before the payment. The manner was stair at me because I was argue with them. I want that you to increase your staff member and provide full facility to your customer which is more useful for you. I hope you will think about that. Yours faithfully, Namrata Sonani.
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to complain about your services which
are unsatisfied
. I visited your sport club on last Saturday with my
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
colleagues and
we were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
disappointed with you services.

In the club there were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
activity is available which is the
first
thing to notice by us, and the most
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
was waiter services was not impressive.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
players did their work by
The term is non-standard and not widely accepted.
themself
there were
Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean "less work"?
less worker
available and this was
Possible spelling mistake found.
unfacility
they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
us already.

On the second day I
Possible spelling mistake found.
complanced
about it, they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that when you
Use second person verb with 'you': "are" or "were".
was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to the club we inform you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
the payment. The manner was stair at me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I was
Consider using a past participle here: "argued".
argue
with them.

I
Did you mean "want you to"?
want that you
to increase your staff member and provide full facility to your customer which is more useful for you.

I hope you will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
about that.

Yours
faithfully
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Namrata
Possible spelling mistake found.
Sonani
.
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IELTS letter write a letter to a sports club. Tell them to you are not satisfied with the service and have already let them know about it.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
153 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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