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You have received a bag. Write a letter to the owner of the bag.

You have received a bag. Write a letter to the owner of the bag. 0aQLn
Dear Mr. Rohan, I am writing this letter to inform you that I have recieved a bag which was found me on the shop No. 9, first floor at AIR Mall. This bag is dark blue and Gussi brand bag. There were some important documents like, Identity card, your Driving licence, Bank passbook and other crucial paper also available in the bag. I found your name and address with help of the documents. I was decided to return this bag as soon as early. It was understood that you would be very worry because of the bag with document. I am living at santosa hights, uttran which is not very far from your house. You can collect the bag from me on the coming weekend on my given address. Just give me a call before coming so that I can be available at home when you arrive. My phone number is written at the back. See you soon. Yours sincerely, Namrata Sonani.
Dear Mr. Rohan,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have
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recieved
a
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bag
which
was found
me on the shop No. 9,
first
floor at AIR Mall. This
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bag
is dark blue and
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Gussi
brand bag.

There were
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some
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important
documents like, Identity card, your Driving
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licence
, Bank passbook and other crucial paper
also
available in the
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bag
. I found your name and address with
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help
of the documents. I
was decided
to return this
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bag
as
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soon
as early. It
was understood
that you would be
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very
worry
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because
of the
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bag
with document.

I am living at
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santosa
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hights
,
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uttran
which is not
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very
far from your
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house
. You can collect the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
from me on the coming weekend on my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
address.
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Just
give me a call
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before
coming
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so
that I can be available at home when you arrive. My phone number
is written
at the back.

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See
you
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soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,
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Namrata
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Sonani
.
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IELTS letter You have received a bag. Write a letter to the owner of the bag.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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