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Write an email/ a letter (120-150 words) to your English pen friend - David about the advantages of studying abroad

Write an email/ a letter (120-150 words) to your English pen friend - David about the advantages of studying abroad X7M9r
Dear David, Thank you for your email. I am so glad to hear that you will be able to study in Australia. If you are still concerned about going, let me tell you that studying abroad is the most effective way of facilitating future career preparation. One huge benefit is the opportunity to improve your language skills. Studying overseas allows you to fully immerse yourself in a new language, and there is no better way to learn than by diving right in. Besides, interacting with diverse cultures will also have a long-term impact on your way of life. Furthermore, they lay a solid foundation for you to gain a better understanding and appreciation of your worldview. Finally, when you are going abroad, you will receive a higher quality of education. Needless to say, it can help you stand out to potential employers. I understand that you do not want to miss out on things back home. However, there are many fascinating things waiting for you. Do not let the chance slip away. I look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes Chi
Dear David,

Thank you for your email. I am
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so
glad to hear that you will be able to study in Australia. If you are
still
concerned about going,
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let
me
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tell
you that studying abroad is the most effective way of facilitating future career preparation.

One huge benefit is the opportunity to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
your language
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skills
. Studying overseas
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
you to
fully
immerse yourself in a new language, and there is no better way to learn than by diving right in.
Besides
, interacting with diverse cultures will
also
have a long-term impact on your way of life.
Furthermore
, they lay a solid foundation for you to gain a better understanding and appreciation of your worldview.
Finally
, when you are going abroad, you will receive a higher quality of education. Needless to say, it can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you stand out to potential employers.

I understand that you do not want to miss out on things back home.
However
, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
fascinating things waiting for you. Do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
the chance slip away.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes

Chi
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IELTS letter Write an email/ a letter (120-150 words) to your English pen friend - David about the advantages of studying abroad

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  American English
6 paragraphs
181 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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