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In addition to your full-time job, you are taking a 15-hour Computer Science course. You now find that you cannot continue with the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter: Describe your schedule and situation Explain why you cannot continue the course Say what action you would like to take Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses

In addition to your full-time job, you are taking a 15-hour Computer Science course. You now find that you cannot continue with the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter: Describe your schedule and situation Explain why you cannot continue the course Say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses YeKQ
Dear Ms. Franklin, I am writing this letter to take my name back from computer science course because of unable to mange professional time. Last month company decided a hike for me and promoted as compliance manager. It’s very challenging but I’m loving it, Consequently after work meetings getting spare time for the course not possible at the moment. I really want to pursue this course because of my interest moreover essential for the career. But right now work is making it extremely difficult to pursue this course. I rarely have any time for myself. I hope you understand my concern. Therefore, my final thought is to put it on hold and finish it on summer holidays which are now after three months. Pleas either enroll me for that class or refund the fees. Waiting for your prompt reply. Yours Sincerely
Dear Ms. Franklin, I am writing this letter to take my name back from computer science
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of unable to mange professional time. Last month
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company
decided a hike for me and promoted as compliance manager. It’s
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very
challenging
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but
I’
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m loving
it,
Consequently
after work meetings getting spare time for the
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course
not possible at the moment.

I
really
want to pursue this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of my interest
moreover
essential for the career.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
right
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
work is making it
extremely
difficult to pursue this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
. I rarely have any time for myself. I hope you understand my concern.

Therefore
, my final
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
is to put it on hold and finish it on summer holidays which are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
after three months. Pleas either enroll me for that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
or refund the fees. Waiting for your prompt reply.

Yours
Sincerely

IELTS letter In addition to your full-time job, you are taking a 15-hour Computer Science course. You now find that you cannot continue with the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter: Describe your schedule and situation Explain why you cannot continue the course Say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses

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  American English
4 paragraphs
140 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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