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Last week, you lost your luggage while traveling on holiday. Luckily, you have travel insurance. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: Describe the characteristics of what you lost Explain how you lost it Tell the insurance company what you need from them Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam.

Last week, you lost your luggage while traveling on holiday. Luckily, you have travel insurance. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: Describe the characteristics of what you lost Explain how you lost it Tell the insurance company what you need from them You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam. 0P9n
Dear sir, I am writing this letter with regards to loss of my luggage while traveling from New Delhi to New York. Let me explain my situation. I travelled on 10/27/2020 from Delta air line 943, After luggage check in flight staff told me I will get it at my destination, Surprisingly when I reach my destination I was told that luggage is Misplaced due to some mix up, Consequently please report the lost section. Eventually ended without help from the flight authority in finding baggage. While traveling I had my expensive Mac book worth of $2000 in the case other than that some clothes and two expensive perfumes worth of $250 each. Hoping to get a positive response for lost stuff. I request to refund me financially equivalent to belongings lost. My policy number is k23456, further more please do let me know if you require any formality from me. Looking forward to hearing from you promptly. Yours Faithfully
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
with regards to
loss of my luggage while traveling from New Delhi to New York.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me
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explain
my situation. I travelled on 10/27/2020 from Delta air line 943, After luggage
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
in flight staff
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told
me I will
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get
it at my destination,
Surprisingly
when I reach my destination I was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
that luggage
is Misplaced
due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
Did you mean "mixes"?
mix
up,
Consequently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
report the lost section.
Eventually
ended without
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
from the flight authority in finding baggage.

While
The comma is probably missing here: "traveling, I".
traveling I
had my expensive
This word is normally spelled as one.
Mac book
worth of $2000 in the case other than that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
clothes and two expensive perfumes worth of $250 each. Hoping to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response for lost stuff.

I request to refund me
financially
equivalent to belongings lost. My policy number is k23456,
further
more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
do
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know if you require any formality from me. Looking forward to hearing from you
promptly
.

Yours
Faithfully

IELTS letter Last week, you lost your luggage while traveling on holiday. Luckily, you have travel insurance. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: Describe the characteristics of what you lost Explain how you lost it Tell the insurance company what you need from them You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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