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Write a letter to a friend. In your letter, apologize for damaging the product/stuff explain what happened say how are you going to fix the issue You should write at least 150 words.

Write a letter to a friend. In your letter, apologize for damaging the product/stuff explain what happened say how are you going to fix the issue jDoa1
Dear Hiral, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and good spirit. I am very contrite to say that the book I borrowed from you last week got damaged. I am very sorry for this event and I cannot find words to show how miserable I feel about it. I know how important that book is to you as it was passed down by your grandfather. Last night when I was reading the chapter on DIY Plumbing, I accidentally spilled my cup of coffee on the open pages of the book and they got spoiled. I have sent the book away for repairing. I didn't realize that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway, it should be as good as new when I get it next week and will send it over as soon as I receive it. Again, I am sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you can forgive me. Best WishesParul
Dear
Hiral
, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and
good
spirit. I am
very
contrite to say that the
book
I borrowed from you last week
got
damaged. I am
very
sorry for this
event
and I cannot find words to
show
how miserable I feel about it.
I
know how
important
that
book
is to you as it
was passed
down by your grandfather. Last night when I was reading the chapter on DIY Plumbing, I
accidentally
spilled my cup of coffee on the open pages of the
book and
they
got
spoiled. I have
sent
the
book
away for repairing. I didn't realize that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway, it should be as
good
as new when I
get
it
next
week and will
send
it over as
soon
as I receive it. Again, I am sorry for the delay in telling you. I hope you can forgive me. Best
WishesParul
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend. In your letter, apologize for damaging the product/stuff explain what happened say how are you going to fix the issue

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
158 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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