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Description of your today's day

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Hello diary Today I woke up early in the morning and I had to do my household chores and help my aunt in getting grandpa's things done. Today in the morning I just saw instagram story of Sid Sirohi, he was graduating from university of British Columbia. He seems to be very happy and excited and I was just thinking about it and I feeled very motivated and a strong urge of getting admitted in that university in fact I was trying to get into the best universities and motive is to discover myself and travel all around the world, so now I have decided that from today itself I will do anything which is in my hands and fullfill my dreams. My aim it to admit in any Canadian college/ university by 2023-2024. Getting 2 years program and securing my future and after completing my studies I want to get my post study work permit for three year and work hard for any institution and prove my worth and then eventually I want to settle there and gain financial stability. Furthermore, i want to invite my parents to my place and live my life with them. After some time I want to explore some new place in canada and world visiting United States and going to visit new places and fullfill my childhood dreams with my parents.

Hello diary

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 time I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
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