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Letter asking friend to find a job in forign country

Letter asking friend to find a job in forign country 3WxRn
Dear Henry, Hope you are doing great in Canada. Give my wishes to your parents. It's a long time since we have made a conversation. You will be joyous to hear that I have been granted a four years student visa of Canada. I will be permitted to work for 20 hours a week while I am studying. Consequently, I would like to carry out part time work and for that I require your help. I am planning to work for full days on week ends. You are well versed with financial condition of my family and I do not want to put additional burden of my school fees and routine expenses on my family. I am herewith attaching my resume for your reference. I suggest that you Please disseminate the same amongst your friends and also please give them to the local recruitment agencies. That would help me to lend an interview when I reach there. I can't wait to meet you and relive our school days. If you require any details from my side, please let me know. Thanks Pankaj
Dear Henry, Hope you are doing great in Canada. Give my wishes to your parents. It's a long time since we have made a conversation.

You will be joyous to hear that I have
been granted
a four years student visa of Canada. I will
be permitted
to work for 20 hours a week while I am studying.

Consequently
, I would like to carry out
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
part time
work and for that I require your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.

I am planning to work for full days on week ends. You are well versed with financial condition of my family and I do not want to put additional burden of my school fees and routine expenses on my family. I am herewith attaching my resume for your reference. I suggest that you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
disseminate the same amongst your friends and
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
give them to the local recruitment agencies. That would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to lend an interview when I reach there.

I can't wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you and relive our school days. If you require any
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
from my side,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know.

When a person is directly addressed, a comma should set off the name: "Thanks, Pankaj"?
Thanks Pankaj
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IELTS letter Letter asking friend to find a job in forign country

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
181 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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