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Your sister forgot at her mother apartment. Write a letter to inform your sister

Your sister forgot at her mother apartment. Write a letter to inform your sister R2pAp
Dear Sister, Hope you will be in good health. I am writing this letter to mention that you forget some things which you might not noticed. Every year at least once in while we celebrate family reunion. But in last year 2020 it was not happened because of pandemic situation. At that period, still we enjoyed through video call. Now condition is in controlled. So that's why few days back, decided to execute family reunion plan. And just like planned all activities were joyfully celebrated. As party over, you all left to your apartment. But you forgot to checked briefcase. I found some things at the of room cleaning. There are few important stuffs might be important. So I add all stuff in a bag and hand over to father, who will deliver to your apartment as early as possible. Kindly check if any other things forgotten and inform me. Yours lovingly, Ganesh
Dear Sister,

Hope you will be in
good
health. I am writing this letter to mention that you forget
some
things which you might not
noticed
.

Every year at least once in while we celebrate family reunion.
But
in last year 2020 it was not happened
because
of pandemic situation. At that period,
still
we enjoyed through video call.
Now
condition is in controlled.
So
that's why few days back, decided to execute family reunion plan. And
just
like planned all activities were
joyfully
celebrated.

As party over, you all
left
to your apartment.
But
you forgot to
checked
briefcase. I found
some
things at the of room cleaning. There are few
important
stuffs might be
important
.
So
I
add
all stuff in a bag and hand over to father, who will deliver to your apartment as early as possible.

Kindly
check
if any other things forgotten and inform me.

Yours
lovingly
,

Ganesh
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IELTS letter Your sister forgot at her mother apartment. Write a letter to inform your sister

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
152 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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