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I am writing to complain about my roommate who I am living together at the moment.

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Dear SirBy present letter I am writing to complain about my roommate who I am living together at the moment. I am studying at medical university. Thus, I am living dormitory. Unfortunately, my roommate is bothering me because He is always listening to music very loudly and singing music. As a student. I would be very grateful if you give me another room because I don't want to live together this roommate. I am looking forward to your reply and solution to my problem. Sincerely yours student James Bond.
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present letter I am writing to complain about my roommate who I am living together at the moment. I am studying at medical university.
Thus
, I am living dormitory. Unfortunately, my roommate is bothering me
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because
He is always listening to music
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very
loudly
and singing music. As a student. I would be
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very
grateful if you give me another room
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I don't want to
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live
together this roommate. I am looking forward to your reply and solution to my problem.
Sincerely
yours student James Bond.
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IELTS letter I am writing to complain about my roommate who I am living together at the moment.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
89 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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