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Write a letter to a friend about an upcoming event in your town. Include What the event is Why they would be interested An invitation to stay with you

Write a letter to a friend about an upcoming event in your town. Include What the event is Why they would be interested An invitation to stay with you NrbJN

Dear Meera, Greetings, I hope this letter finds you well and happy. I am writing this about a interesting seminar I came to know about on Entrepreneurship in Canada 2021. This even will be organized by Canadian Business Society on 5th and 6th of May this year at company’s Toronto office. Multiple industry leaders will sharing, their valuable experience as well as there will seminars on the resources available for startups in our country. I am sure this is something which you will like to attend, as you are working on your own startup and this can definitely help you to proceed further in your journey. For accommodation and other basic requirements, my place is always available for you at the same time you will save a lot of money. I hope you will consider attending this event and do let me know if you need any help for registration. I can go and register you personally at company’s office. I hope to see you soon. Warm regards Rishi

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Warm regards

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