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You stay with your friend and by mistake you carried some object with you.

You stay with your friend and by mistake you carried some object with you. E3a7D

Dear Hemali, I hope you're doing great. I was enjoyed a lot when I was with you during the weekend after so long we were together. By the way the reason I'm writing this letter is by mistake I bring your make up kit along with me. It was a lot of fun to be with you. After a long time spent some time and I am happy we recollect our old memories. I overjoy while visiting near by places and click the pictures. Furthermore, Your make up kit bring along with me. I know it's expensive and you are make up artist it's essential for you. I don't know how it's in my beg. but may be I kept along with my things. I return your kit in post. It will take around 1 week to received it. Your sincerely, Riddhi

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.FemaleEmailHealMaliSomaliNepali
Hemali
,

I hope you're doing great. I was enjoyed
 a lot when I was with you during the weekend after This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 long we were together. By Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the way the'. Did you mean "way the"?way the
the way the
 reason I'm writing this letter is by mistake I bring your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 up kit along with me.

It was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 fun to be with you. After a long time spent This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).time, and
time and
 I am happy we recollect our This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 memories. I overjoy while visiting Did you mean "nearby"?nearby
near by
 places and click the pictures.

Furthermore
, Your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 up kit bring along with me. I know it's expensive and you are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 up artist it's essential for you. I don't know how it's in my The word 'beg' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "bag"?bag
beg
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBut
but
Did you mean "maybe" (= perhaps)?maybe
may be
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 along with my things.

I return your kit in post. It will take around 1 week to received it.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.RiddenRiddleSindhiRADDHO
Riddhi