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You stay with your friend and by mistake you carried some object with you.

You stay with your friend and by mistake you carried some object with you. E3a7D
Dear Hemali, I hope you're doing great. I was enjoyed a lot when I was with you during the weekend after so long we were together. By the way the reason I'm writing this letter is by mistake I bring your make up kit along with me. It was a lot of fun to be with you. After a long time spent some time and I am happy we recollect our old memories. I overjoy while visiting near by places and click the pictures. Furthermore, Your make up kit bring along with me. I know it's expensive and you are make up artist it's essential for you. I don't know how it's in my beg. but may be I kept along with my things. I return your kit in post. It will take around 1 week to received it. Your sincerely, Riddhi
Dear
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Hemali
,

I hope you're doing great. I
was enjoyed
a lot when I was with you during the weekend after
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
long we were together. By
Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the way the'. Did you mean "way the"?
the way the
reason I'm writing this letter is by mistake I bring your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
up kit along with me.

It was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
fun to be with you. After a long time spent
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
time and
I am happy we recollect our
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
memories. I overjoy while visiting
Did you mean "nearby"?
near by
places and click the pictures.

Furthermore
, Your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
up kit bring along with me. I know it's expensive and you are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
up artist it's essential for you. I don't know how it's in my
The word 'beg' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "bag"?
beg
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
but
Did you mean "maybe" (= perhaps)?
may be
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
kept
along with my things.

I return your kit in post. It will take around 1 week to received it.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Riddhi

IELTS letter You stay with your friend and by mistake you carried some object with you.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
141 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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