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You saw a job advertisement on a website. Write a letter and apply for the job; • let them know your qualifications for the job. • also mention the places you have worked for • and try to convince them that you are the one they are looking for. Write your letter in an appropriate style and format in150 words on your answer shee

You saw a job advertisement on a website. Write a letter and apply for the job; • let them know your qualifications for the job. • also mention the places you have worked for • and try to convince them that you are the one they are looking for. Write your letter in an appropriate style and format in150 words on your answer shee 9Lo6j
Dear Sir or Madam, Perhaps there is a position for me in your department My name is Aziza. I am an English teacher. It is my intention to work on your teaching club, and so I am writing to you about the possibility of working on your center. I have been working club named SMART. It is very good, but a bit far from my home. Besides that I have worked at school for 10 years. I think I have enough qualifications to work on your teaching center. This coming year I will take my master of degree. I would certainly be interested in hearing from you and wish to have an appointment for an interview. For your convenience I enclose my resume. I look forward to hearing from you and wish you good luck. Yours faithfully, Aziza Aliyeva.
Dear Sir or Madam, Perhaps there is a position for me in your department My name is
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. I am an English teacher. It is my intention to work on your teaching club, and
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I am writing to you about the possibility of working on your center. I have been working club named SMART. It is
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very
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good
,
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but
a bit far from my home.
Besides
that I have worked at school for 10 years. I
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think
I have
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enough
qualifications to work on your teaching center. This coming year I will take my master of degree. I would
certainly
be interested
in hearing from you and wish to have an appointment for an interview. For your convenience I enclose my resume. I look forward to hearing from you and wish you
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good
luck. Yours
faithfully
,
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Aziza
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IELTS letter You saw a job advertisement on a website. Write a letter and apply for the job; • let them know your qualifications for the job. • also mention the places you have worked for • and try to convince them that you are the one they are looking for. Write your letter in an appropriate style and format in150 words on your answer shee

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  American English
1 paragraphs
139 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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