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Dear Ms. Lisa, Hope you and your family are healthy. As you know me and my friend Gordon rented 226, Gateway Manor S, Lethbridge property of yours last 6 month ago. as you know due to lockdown our university classes where organized online instead of on-campus. Gordon had moved to home town-Nanton with his parents and myself moved to my sister place. But As situation is getting better university is expecting in-class lectures. so, me and Gordon are moving back to Lethbridge. There is an issue coming back to letbridge. I have lots of laugage which includes Queen size matress, 42" inches LED TV and my work desk. problem isnot with moving. It's my right arm has minor crack in born. doctor reccomand not to lift heavy items because it may harm more and recovery may take long.
Dear Ms. Lisa, Hope you and your family are healthy. As you know me and my friend Gordon rented 226, Gateway Manor S, Lethbridge property of yours last 6
month
ago.
as
you know due to lockdown our university classes where organized online
instead
of on-campus. Gordon had
moved
to home
town-Nanton
with his parents and
myself
moved
to my sister place.
But
As situation is getting better university is expecting in-
class
lectures.
so
, me and Gordon are moving back to Lethbridge.

There is an issue coming back to
letbridge
. I have lots of
laugage
which includes Queen size
matress
, 42" inches LED TV and my work desk.
problem
isnot
with moving. It's my right arm has minor crack in born.
doctor
reccomand
not to lift heavy items
because
it may harm more and recovery may take long.
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