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Dear Harman, I'm writing this letter in order to congratulate you on your achievement. Also, I'm going to tell you about my future plans. There's a big smile on my face when I heard that you got a gold medal at swimming competition at district level. You must be cloud nine. As you're continuously doing hard work for the game, it, at last, paid off. What's your further plans regarding the game? Le, me tell you about my game status. For the last 2 years, I's practicing for volleyball; nevertheless, last month I met with an accident and there is a serious injury in my leg, and hence no volleyball at all. Would you help me with my recovery? Although it'll take few months to do full recovery, I'm eyeing the state championship next January. I thought that you would help me with my leg strain as you've done a graduation in physiotherapy. I just need your guidance in order to recover fast. Congratulations again! I hope that you'll understand my situation and help me this time. Best Wishes, Sukhi
Dear
Harman
, I'm writing this letter in order to congratulate you on your achievement.
Also
, I'm going to
tell
you about my future plans.

There's a
big
smile on my face when I heard that you
got
a gold medal at swimming competition at district level. You
must
be cloud nine. As you're
continuously
doing
hard
work for the game, it, at last, paid off. What's your
further
plans regarding the game?

Le, me
tell
you about my game status. For the last 2 years, I's practicing for volleyball;
nevertheless
, last month I met with an accident and there is a serious injury in my leg, and
hence
no volleyball at all.

Would you
help
me with my recovery? Although it'll take few months to do full recovery, I'm eyeing the state championship
next
January. I
thought
that you would
help
me with my leg strain as you've done a graduation in physiotherapy. I
just
need your guidance in order to recover
fast
.

Congratulations again! I hope that you'll understand my situation and
help
me this time.

Best Wishes,
Sukhi
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IELTS letter you met with an accident and need your friend help for recovery

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6.0
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