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Write a letter to a course manager to enroll on the course.

Write a letter to a course manager to enroll on the course. xxqgo

Dear Sir, I am writing for a place on the History MA cours which commences this September at Winston University. I am 25 years old and I have complated a history degree at Macbriney Univerdity where I received the first class hours. Prior to this, I obtained four A levels in History, English, Maths, and Geography. Since the completion of my BA degree I have spent one year working as assisstant historian. This work was very enjoyable. Moreover, I have learned the language very well and I can say I handle it as a specialist and I am in anxious now to specialize by gaining further qualifications before embarking on my chosen career in this field. I enclosed every details of my education and qualifications and address to contact with me. I hope, you will condider me as a suitable candidate for this entry. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. Yourth faithfully.

Dear Sir,

I am writing for a place on the History MA Possible spelling mistake found.coursecourthourscourtstoursfours
cours
 which commences this September at Winston University.

I am 25 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and I have Possible spelling mistake found.completedcom plated
complated
 a history degree at Possible spelling mistake found.MacBride
Macbriney
Possible spelling mistake found.University
Univerdity
 where I received the first
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 hours. Prior to this, I obtained four This word is normally spelled with hyphen.A-levels
A levels
 in History, English, Possible spelling mistake. 'Maths' is British English.Math
Maths
, and Geography.

“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
 the completion of my BA degree I have spent one year working as Possible spelling mistake found.assistant
assisstant
 historian. This work was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 enjoyable. Moreover
, I have learned the language This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well and I can say I handle it as a Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).specialist, and
specialist and
 I am in anxious This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 to specialize by gaining further
 qualifications This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 embarking on my chosen career in this field.

I enclosed every The noun should be probably in the singular form: "detail"?detail
details
 of my education and qualifications and address to contact with me.

I hope, you will Possible spelling mistake found.considerconfider
condider
 me as a suitable candidate for this entry.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 am looking forward to hearing from you as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Possible spelling mistake found.FourthYouth
Yourth
faithfully
. 