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the local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are living

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to advise you of the devastating results of a development on a beautiful and necessary green space in my town, which it’s about to destroy. Unfortunately, An industrial company is destroying these lands because of It is own economic benefit. It could affect the natural habitats and the beauty of the town in bad ways, which you are probably aware of it. I have therefore, had to write to your editor to be our voice and to be heard our objections to the governments of the town. We will gather a group of people to protest and resist on company’s activities. And we ask you to come along and report from our protest. There is also something that I want from you, is to make reporting with protestors and broadcast it on news and radio. This can attract lots of attention, which may prevent the instructions. I would be very grateful if you would attend to this matter as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Ebrahim Rahbari Asr
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you to advise you of the devastating results of a development on a
beautiful
and necessary green space in my town, which it’s about to
destroy
. Unfortunately, An industrial
company
is destroying these lands
because
of It is
own
economic benefit. It could affect the natural habitats and the beauty of the town in
bad
ways, which you are
probably
aware of it. I have
therefore
, had to write to your editor to be our voice and to
be heard
our objections to the
governments
of the town. We will gather a group of
people
to protest and resist on
company
’s activities. And we ask you to
come
along and report from our protest.

There is
also
something that I want from you, is to
make
reporting with protestors and broadcast it on news and radio. This can attract lots of attention, which may
prevent
the instructions.

I would be
very
grateful if you would attend to this matter as
soon
as possible.

Yours
sincerely
,

Ebrahim
Rahbari
Asr
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IELTS letter the local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are living

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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