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the local council has decided to build a block of flats on the park opposite the place where you are living

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to advise you of the devastating results of a development on a beautiful and necessary green space in my town, which it’s about to destroy. Unfortunately, An industrial company is destroying these lands because of It is own economic benefit. It could affect the natural habitats and the beauty of the town in bad ways, which you are probably aware of it. I have therefore, had to write to your editor to be our voice and to be heard our objections to the governments of the town. We will gather a group of people to protest and resist on company’s activities. And we ask you to come along and report from our protest. There is also something that I want from you, is to make reporting with protestors and broadcast it on news and radio. This can attract lots of attention, which may prevent the instructions. I would be very grateful if you would attend to this matter as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Ebrahim Rahbari Asr

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you to advise you of the devastating results of a development on a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 and necessary green space in my town, which it’s about to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishruin
destroy
. Unfortunately, An industrial This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 is destroying these lands This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 economic benefit. It could affect the natural habitats and the beauty of the town in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 ways, which you are probably
 aware of it. I have therefore
, had to write to your editor to be our voice and to be heard
 our objections to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
 of the town. We will gather a group of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to protest and resist on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
’s activities. And we ask you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 along and report from our protest.

There is also
 something that I want from you, is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 reporting with protestors and broadcast it on news and radio. This can attract lots of attention, which may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 the instructions.

I would be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 grateful if you would attend to this matter as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Yours sincerely
,

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Ebrahim
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Rahbari
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Asr