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You have been living in an apartment for the last three years. A few problems have emerged in your apartment since the last repair. Write a letter to your landlord.

You have been living in an apartment for the last three years. A few problems have emerged in your apartment since the last repair. Write a letter to your landlord. 2x8Kk
Dear Mr. Robinson, I am writing to report a few issues regarding the newly-repaired apartment. Despite its recent renovation, my living space returned to its damaged state when leakages and cracks reoccurred. About 2 months ago, I contacted you to look for a solution to the aforementioned problems, so you assigned a plumber to fix them. While he completed his tasks, I did not think he strictly solved them at his best, and this doubt became true last week. Fractures on the walls became visible again, and pipes started to leak as much as their former conditions, which made me back to square one. Therefore, a clear explanation is required. The damage having been done, I would like to suggest a handful of measures. The best thing you can do is to ask another plumber who has a higher profession than the previous one to refurbish my place. In this way, recurring issues will be immediately addressed and removed, future-proofing my home. Similarly, you can also upgrade the systems or inspect the building, both of which are useful. I look forwards to your reply. Yours sincerely, Hoang Pham
Dear Mr. Robinson,

I am writing to report a few issues regarding the
newly
-repaired apartment. Despite its recent renovation, my living space returned to its damaged state when leakages and cracks reoccurred.

About 2 months ago, I contacted you to look for a solution to the aforementioned problems,
so
you assigned a plumber to
fix
them. While he completed his tasks, I did not
think
he
strictly
solved them at his best, and this doubt became true last week. Fractures on the walls became visible again, and pipes
started
to leak as much as their former conditions, which made me back to square one.
Therefore
, a
clear
explanation
is required
.

The damage having
been done
, I would like to suggest a handful of measures. The best thing you can do is to ask another plumber who has a higher profession than the previous one to refurbish my place. In this way, recurring issues will be immediately addressed and removed, future-proofing my home.
Similarly
, you can
also
upgrade the systems or inspect the building, both of which are useful.

I look forwards to your reply.

Yours
sincerely
,

Hoang
Pham
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IELTS letter You have been living in an apartment for the last three years. A few problems have emerged in your apartment since the last repair. Write a letter to your landlord.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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