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letter new house invite friend

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Hoping this letter find you in radiant health and best of spirits. Last week, I have been shifted to new accommodation in your city because I have been appointed as a manager of the ABC company in this region. In addition, this area is very far from my previous home. Luckily, I got home with all the basic facilities such as 3 bed room, a kitchen, a parking area and a laundry area. Besides this, it is just 2 km away from my new office. Also, a beautiful garden where lots of fruits trees are grown, This house is comparitively larger than my previous home In addition, the walls are painted with beautiful colors. I am planning a small party at my new residence. I would like to invite you at my party. Only, I invited our five friends. We will get a chance to spend a quality time together. I hope you will surely come and join us. hoping for a positive response from your side.
Hoping this letter find you in radiant health and best of spirits. Last week, I have
been shifted
to new accommodation in your city
because
I have
been appointed
as a manager of the ABC
company
in this region.
In addition
, this area is
very
far from my previous home.

Luckily, I
got
home with all the basic facilities such as 3
bed room
, a kitchen, a parking area and a laundry area.
Besides
this, it is
just
2 km away from my new office.
Also
, a
beautiful
garden where lots of fruits trees
are grown
, This
house
is
comparitively
larger than my previous home
In addition
, the walls
are painted
with
beautiful
colors.

I am planning a
small
party at my new residence. I would like to invite you at my party.
Only
, I invited our five friends. We will
get
a chance to spend a quality time together. I hope you will
surely
come
and
join
us. hoping for a
positive
response from your side.
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IELTS letter letter new house invite friend

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  American English
3 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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