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I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with regard to my recent international flight from Bangalore to Maldives which I couldn't board due to mishappening at the Kempegowda airport.

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with regard to my recent international flight from Bangalore to Maldives which I couldn't board due to mishappening at the Kempegowda airport. Ow3nG

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with regard to my recent international flight from Bangalore to Maldives which I couldn't board due to mishappening at the Kempegowda airport. Security officers halted my important bag during the security check-in due to technical faults or errors in the scanning machine which considerably delayed me and other passengers to reach the boarding gate. And airlines people did not let me board post my arrival since the plane was already on the runway. This entire incident made me miss my other flight which was 4 hours later from the Maldives and I couldn't reach my final destination. Not only this but also I lost the hefty amount which I paid during bookings. I would be grateful if it would be at all possible for the airline to refund the amount or provide me another ticket to my destined point. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Shweta Yadav

Dear Sir/Madam,

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to Maldives
 which I couldn't board due to Possible spelling mistake found.happeningsharpeningmisapplyingresharpening
mishappening
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Kempegowda
 airport.

Security officers halted my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 bag during the security This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
-in due to technical faults or errors in the scanning machine which considerably
 delayed me and other passengers to reach the boarding gate. And airlines This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 did not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 me board post my arrival since the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:aircraft
plane
 was already on the runway.

This entire incident made me miss my other flight which was 4 hours later from the Maldives and I couldn't reach my final destination. Not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 I lost the hefty amount which I paid during bookings.

I would be grateful if it would be at all possible for the airline to refund the amount or provide me another ticket to my destined point.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours faithfully
,

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