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I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with regard to my recent international flight from Bangalore to Maldives which I couldn't board due to mishappening at the Kempegowda airport.

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with regard to my recent international flight from Bangalore to Maldives which I couldn't board due to mishappening at the Kempegowda airport. Ow3nG
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with regard to my recent international flight from Bangalore to Maldives which I couldn't board due to mishappening at the Kempegowda airport. Security officers halted my important bag during the security check-in due to technical faults or errors in the scanning machine which considerably delayed me and other passengers to reach the boarding gate. And airlines people did not let me board post my arrival since the plane was already on the runway. This entire incident made me miss my other flight which was 4 hours later from the Maldives and I couldn't reach my final destination. Not only this but also I lost the hefty amount which I paid during bookings. I would be grateful if it would be at all possible for the airline to refund the amount or provide me another ticket to my destined point. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Shweta Yadav
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with regard to my recent international flight from Bangalore
A determiner is probably missing here: "to the Maldives".
to Maldives
which I couldn't board due to
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mishappening
at the
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Kempegowda
airport.

Security officers halted my
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important
bag during the security
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check
-in due to technical faults or errors in the scanning machine which
considerably
delayed me and other passengers to reach the boarding gate. And airlines
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people
did not
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let
me board post my arrival since the
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plane
was already on the runway.

This entire incident made me miss my other flight which was 4 hours later from the Maldives and I couldn't reach my final destination. Not
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only
this
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but
also
I lost the hefty amount which I paid during bookings.

I would be grateful if it would be at all possible for the airline to refund the amount or provide me another ticket to my destined point.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Shweta
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Yadav

IELTS letter I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with regard to my recent international flight from Bangalore to Maldives which I couldn't board due to mishappening at the Kempegowda airport.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
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