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Dear Zara and Sara, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best spirits. Yesterday, I received a gift box along with a gift card that you send for me. Thank you so much both of you to such a beautiful gift me. You wanted to know that what doing me. You know, last month I met an accident and unfortunately, I have broken my left leg. I was hospital for 7 days, now I am at home as per doctor suggestion. As I am not able to move, I spent my time by doing some work related research Internet through my laptop as well as read different books with different topics. Apart from that I also spent my time using social media like facebook, YouTube and many more. I think my leg condition going to better day by day, doctor also told me it better than before. He suggested me to take two month rest and doing some exercise, I am following him every word. He always motivate me and told not to worry, hope I recover very soon! Hope see you soon all of you. Your truly, Alamgir
Dear Zara and Sara,

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best spirits. Yesterday, I received a gift box along with a gift card that you
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send
for me. Thank you
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so
much both of you to such a
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beautiful
gift me.

You wanted to know that what doing me. You know, last month I met an accident and unfortunately, I have broken my
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left
leg. I was hospital for 7 days,
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now
I am at home as per doctor suggestion. As I am not able to
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move
, I spent my time by doing
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some
work related research Internet through my laptop
as well
as read
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different
books with
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different
topics. Apart from that I
also
spent my time using social media like
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facebook
, YouTube and
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many
more.

I
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think
my leg condition going to better day by day, doctor
also
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told
me it better than
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before
. He suggested me to take two month rest and doing
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some
exercise, I am following him every word. He always
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motivate
me and
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told
not to worry, hope I recover
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very
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soon
!

Hope
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see
you
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soon
all of you.

Your
truly
,

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Alamgir

IELTS letter Write a letter to your colleauges.

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7 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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