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Dear Zara and Sara, I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best spirits. Yesterday, I received a gift box along with a gift card that you send for me. Thank you so much both of you to such a beautiful gift me. You wanted to know that what doing me. You know, last month I met an accident and unfortunately, I have broken my left leg. I was hospital for 7 days, now I am at home as per doctor suggestion. As I am not able to move, I spent my time by doing some work related research Internet through my laptop as well as read different books with different topics. Apart from that I also spent my time using social media like facebook, YouTube and many more. I think my leg condition going to better day by day, doctor also told me it better than before. He suggested me to take two month rest and doing some exercise, I am following him every word. He always motivate me and told not to worry, hope I recover very soon! Hope see you soon all of you. Your truly, Alamgir
Dear Zara and Sara,

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best spirits. Yesterday, I received a gift box along with a gift card that you
send
for me. Thank you
so
much both of you to such a
beautiful
gift me.

You wanted to know that what doing me. You know, last month I met an accident and unfortunately, I have broken my
left
leg. I was hospital for 7 days,
now
I am at home as per doctor suggestion. As I am not able to
move
, I spent my time by doing
some
work related research Internet through my laptop
as well
as read
different
books with
different
topics. Apart from that I
also
spent my time using social media like
facebook
, YouTube and
many
more.

I
think
my leg condition going to better day by day, doctor
also
told
me it better than
before
. He suggested me to take two month rest and doing
some
exercise, I am following him every word. He always
motivate
me and
told
not to worry, hope I recover
very
soon
!

Hope
see
you
soon
all of you.

Your
truly
,

Alamgir
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  American English
7 paragraphs
191 words
6.0
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