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Write a letter to the Customer Service department. In your letter: Describe the item you bought Outline what the problem is Explain why you want a refund

Write a letter to the Customer Service department. In your letter: Describe the item you bought Outline what the problem is Explain why you want a refund kxpye
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the product I purchased from your online store. I have bought shoes from your website named www. Falabella. com. The shoe was a brand of Nike, the color of the shoe was blue. It was called the Jordon Air shoes on the internet. These shoes were hard to get from any other websites luckily it was available in yours. There were no issues when I was buying this shoe and the issue happened when I used the product for two days in a row. The leather was torn off when it was mentioned as waterproof also it was giving me tremendous pain on my foot after the use. I do believe that if I continue to use this product it will cause me serious pain and I do believe that this is not worth the money. Due to this, I have raised the ticket for a full refund. It would be great if I can get a response on the request which I have raised prior a month. I find it most unsatisfactory that one month after my initial request, my deposit has still not been refunded. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Soju George
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the product I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
from your online store.

I have
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bought
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shoes
from your website named
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www
.
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Falabella
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
com
. The
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shoe
was a brand of Nike, the color of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shoe
was blue. It
was called
the
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Jordon
Air
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shoes
on the internet. These
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shoes
were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
from any other websites luckily it was available in yours.

There were no issues when I was buying this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shoe
and the issue happened when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
the product for two days in a row. The leather
was torn
off when it
was mentioned
as waterproof
also
it was giving me tremendous pain on my foot after the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
. I do believe that if I continue to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
this product it will cause me serious pain and I do believe that this is not worth the money. Due to this, I have raised the ticket for a full refund.

It would be great if I can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a response on the request which I have raised prior a month. I find it most unsatisfactory that one month after my initial request, my deposit has
still
not
been refunded
.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Soju
George
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the Customer Service department. In your letter: Describe the item you bought Outline what the problem is Explain why you want a refund

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
209 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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