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Email about body and keep a body healthy

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To: Alice From: Ali Hi alice whats up? Well I think its good idea to keep your body healthy, my opinion do execise regular in the gym our in the park its depend your budget, you can get a personal trainer and exersice with his/her plan, our you can take your own plan! No matter you exercise in the park, gym, home just keep your motivations and go! If you just do exercise and don’t take your diet and don’t use vegetables and fruit you just lost your time and energy its super important, and always every days just eat protein chiken chest, cow meet and beans and so on. If you want I can give you a diet and exercise plan because I have a lot of experience about body and exercise. Best regards
To: Alice

From: Ali

Hi
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alice
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whats
up?

Well I
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good
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keep
your body healthy, my opinion do
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execise
regular in the gym our in the park its
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depend
your budget, you can
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get
a personal trainer and
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exersice
with his/her plan, our you can take your
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own
plan!

No matter you exercise in the park, gym, home
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just
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keep
your motivations and go!

If you
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just
do exercise and don’t take your diet and don’t
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use
vegetables and fruit you
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just
lost your time and energy its super
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important
, and always every
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days
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just
eat protein
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chiken
chest, cow
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meet
and beans and
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so
on.

If you want I can give you a diet and exercise plan
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because
I have
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a lot of
experience about body and exercise.

Best regards

IELTS letter Email about body and keep a body healthy

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  American English
7 paragraphs
134 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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