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You Have Recently Started Work In A New Company. Write A Letter To An English Speaking Friend

You Have Recently Started Work In A New Company. Write A Letter To An English Speaking Friend LbWNG
Dear Adam, It’s been a long time since we last met. I am writing this letter to tell you about the new job that I recently started. I worked as a senior trainer at St. Stephens School of Languages for ten long years and yet my remuneration was comparatively low. I somehow made peace with that amount but lately the work culture in the organisation started to change and my work became quite monotonous. Hence, I didn’t think twice when I received a job opportunity at the British Institute. Now, after joining The British institute, which is a multinational firm, my life underwent a sea change. It’s been two months now and I’ve trained around fifty teachers and I travelled to almost six states in such a short time span. I am highly satisfied with the optimistic environment and handsome compensation I am getting at this place. Moreover, the organisation has considered me to be a part of their exchange program in Canada and I will be flying there next month. I really want to see you in person and tell you more about it. Let’s catch up next weekend. Can’t wait to see you. Best wishes, Neeru
Dear Adam,

It’s been a long time since we last met. I am writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you about the new job that I recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
.

I worked as a senior trainer at St. Stephens School of Languages for ten long years and
yet
my remuneration was
comparatively
low.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
somehow made peace with that amount
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but
lately the work culture in the
Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.
organisation
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
and my work became quite monotonous.
Hence
, I didn’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
twice when I received a job opportunity at the British Institute.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
, after joining The British institute, which is a multinational firm, my life underwent a sea
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
. It’s been two months
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
and I’ve trained around fifty teachers and I travelled to almost six states in such a short time span. I am
highly
satisfied with the optimistic environment and handsome compensation I am getting at this place.

Moreover
, the
Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.
organisation
has considered me to be a part of their exchange program in

Canada and I will be flying there
next
month. I
really
want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you in person and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you

more about it.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
’s catch up
next
weekend.

Can’t wait to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you.

Best wishes,

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Neeru
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IELTS letter You Have Recently Started Work In A New Company. Write A Letter To An English Speaking Friend

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
197 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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