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Imagine that you have just received a donation of one million dongs from one of the local organizations to build your school library. write a letter to acknowledge the receipt of the donation and express your gratitude.

Imagine that you have just received a donation of one million dongs from one of the local organizations to build your school library. write a letter to acknowledge the receipt of the donation and express your gratitude. 9weWX
278, Cytosine Road, California 15th May 2029 Dear Mrs. Kalin On behalf of the Alumni Potassium Primary school, I would like to extend my sincere to your organization for donating an amount of 1. 000. 000 VND on 13th May, 2029. This help from your donation is greatly appreciated and extremely helpful in constructing a library for all of our students. With the increasing number of admissions, we realized the need for having a library in our premises which can give the students more options to explore the world of knowledge by reading. However, we were unable to construct a library in this school on account of financial constraints. Now with your kind help, we will be capable of creating for our students. We truly appreciate your support to Alumni Potassium students and the focus on improving literacy. Learning to love to read is a major focus at our school and having many books to put into the hands of our students is key in fostering the love for reading. Therefore, all students can move from “learning to read” to “reading to learn”! Once again, we gratefully acknowledge the assistance of your organization for coming forward and helping these students with their education. We are extremely fortunate to have you as a magnanimous donor. The spirit of giving at this time of year has been exemplified by your generosity. With sincere thanks Ellen Granger, Alumni Potassium Primary school
278, Cytosine Road, California

15th May 2029

Dear Mrs.
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Kalin


On behalf of the Alumni Potassium Primary
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, I would like to extend my sincere to your organization for donating an amount of 1. 000. 000 VND on 13th
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help
from your donation is
greatly
appreciated and
extremely
helpful in constructing a library for all of our students.

With the increasing number of admissions, we realized the need for having a library in our premises which can give the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
more options to explore the world of knowledge by reading.
However
, we were unable to construct a library in this
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school
on account of financial constraints.
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Now
with your kind
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help
, we will be capable of creating for our students.

We
truly
appreciate your support to Alumni Potassium
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students
and the focus on improving literacy. Learning to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to read is a major focus at our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
and having
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many
books to put into the hands of our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
is key in fostering the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
for reading.
Therefore
, all
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students
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
from “learning to read” to “reading to learn”!

Once again, we
gratefully
acknowledge the assistance of your organization for coming forward and helping these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
with their education. We are
extremely
fortunate to have you as a magnanimous donor. The spirit of giving at this time of year has
been exemplified
by your generosity.

With sincere thanks

Ellen Granger, Alumni Potassium Primary
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school
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IELTS letter Imagine that you have just received a donation of one million dongs from one of the local organizations to build your school library. write a letter to acknowledge the receipt of the donation and express your gratitude.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
237 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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