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5- You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

5- You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take l5e1
Dear John, I am Nancy and hope you are doing well! I recently moved to one of your properties at rainbow street, London. I am writing to let you know that the furniture provided in your property is not stable and makes noises too! Since there are elderly people and children at my home, I am afraid that the furniture would break and cause serious injuries. This issue was notified to your office staff on the day we moved. He promised to provide us help nevertheless he did not turn back. Please provide assistance in finding some labours to fix the furniture’s as soon as possible. Although the property seems to be fine, we are highly disappointed with the furniture’s. As the problem was reported at the beginning, request you to consider for the discount of 10 percent in the March rent. Looking forward for your reply, Yours sincerely, Nancy Clairre
Dear John,

I am Nancy and hope you are doing well! I recently
moved
to one of your properties at rainbow street, London.
I
am writing to
let
you know that the
furniture
provided in your property is not stable and
makes
noises too! Since there are elderly
people
and children at my home, I am afraid that the
furniture
would break and cause serious injuries. This issue
was notified
to your office staff on the day we
moved
. He promised to provide us
help
nevertheless
he did not turn back.

Please
provide assistance in finding
some
labours
to
fix
the
furniture’s
as
soon
as possible. Although the property seems to be fine, we are
highly
disappointed with the
furniture’s
. As the problem
was reported
at the beginning, request you to consider for the discount of 10 percent in the March rent.

Looking forward for your reply,

Yours
sincerely
,

Nancy
Clairre
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IELTS letter 5- You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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