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Write a letter describing your stay at a holiday resort

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Dear teacher Greetings from England! It is one of fabulous places of the wold! I am staying at beatiful camp-site in England. The weather is rainy there but I like that type of weather. Yesterday we visited to Buckingham Palace but we couldn't be able to see the Princess. Then we dediced to visit to Big Ben and that visiting was incredible! After that we get on bus and went to the London Eye. That was amazing! Today we are going to visit one of English restaurants and try to taste English traditional foods. I am looking forward to do this activity because I love discovering new flavors for myself. With the best wishes Bunyodbek
Dear teacher

Greetings from England! It is one of fabulous places of the wold! I am staying at
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beatiful
camp-site in England. The weather is rainy there
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but
I like that type of weather.

Yesterday we visited to Buckingham Palace
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but
we couldn't be able to
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see
the Princess.

Then we
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dediced
to visit to
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Big
Ben and that visiting was incredible! After that we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
on bus and went to the London Eye. That was amazing!

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Today
we are going to visit one of English restaurants and try to taste English traditional foods. I am looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to doing".
to do
this activity
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because
I
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love
discovering new flavors for myself.

With the best wishes

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Bunyodbek
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IELTS letter Write a letter describing your stay at a holiday resort

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
114 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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