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A letter you received recently from a friend “I failed at my English speaking exam last semester, so now I feel like such a failure; l never get a degree now.“ Write a letter of asking for advice)

A letter you received recently from a friend “I failed at my English speaking exam last semester, so now I feel like such a failure; l never get a degree now. “ Write a letter of asking for advice) 9l7yj
Dear Duong, First of all, many thanks for your letter, in which you shared the latest news with me. It’s nice to hear from you. I’m happy to know that you are doing well. I’m writing to ask for your advice that I have encountered with a problem related to my English at University and I really need your help. I think with your experience in English can help me solve my problem. As you know, I’m not at good at learning English skills especially speaking skills. Last semester, I got low marks on speaking test, so I failed my speaking exam. I tried to listen to music and learn English by watching films, speeches, or TV series. I also practice speaking English with my friends twice a week. However, I cannot improve much and it drives me crazy. I’m so depressed, and feel like I never get a degree. It even makes me feel like such a failure. Therefore, I know you speak English very well, and I hope you give me some tips on this matter. Would you mind letting me know what I should do? Please write to me as soon as you can. Yours, Thuy
Dear
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Duong
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First of all
,
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many
thanks for your letter, in which you shared the latest news with me. It’s nice to hear from you. I’m happy to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
that you are doing well.

I’m writing to
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ask for
your advice that I have encountered with a problem related to my English at University and I
really
need your
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help
.
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I
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think
with your experience in English can
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help
me solve my problem.

As you
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know
, I’m not at
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good
at learning English
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skills
especially
speaking
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skills
. Last semester, I
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got
low marks on speaking
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test
,
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so
I failed my speaking exam. I tried to listen to music and learn English by watching films, speeches, or TV series. I
also
practice speaking English with my friends twice a week.
However
, I cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
much and it drives me crazy.

I’m
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
depressed, and feel like I never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a degree. It even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
me feel like such a failure.
Therefore
, I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
you speak English
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very
well, and I hope you give me
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some
tips on this matter. Would you mind letting me
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
what I should do?
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
write to me as
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soon
as you can.

Yours,

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Thuy
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IELTS letter A letter you received recently from a friend “I failed at my English speaking exam last semester, so now I feel like such a failure; l never get a degree now. “ Write a letter of asking for advice)

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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