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write a letter describing difficulty with accomodation, explain and what kind of accomodatuon you prefer

write a letter describing difficulty with accomodation, explain and what kind of accomodatuon you prefer 6xbJr
Dear sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to let you know that i am facing very bad situation from my accommadation which provide me with a noisy roommate too, it’s hard for me to sink with the on going condition. Now, it’s the time to drag your attention to this scenario. Let me explain my situation. Honestly this place is too loud for me to work, I requested my roommate to put the volume of music down so many times, but it seems like worthless. Reason behind was my job demand me to attend so many calls during my work period and it seems impossible for me to stay here for a longer period. Meanwhile could you able to find me a new accommodation? Actually, I wouldn’t mind if it is less furnished than the current one, but needs to be a quiet for my work that’s the only demanding factor am putting infront of you. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, John
Dear sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to
let
you know that
i
am facing
very
bad
situation from my
accommadation
which provide me with a noisy roommate too, it’s
hard
for me to sink with the
on going
condition.
Now
, it’s the time to drag your attention to this scenario.
Let
me
explain
my situation.
Honestly
this place is too loud for me to work, I requested my roommate to put the volume of music down
so
many
times,
but
it seems like worthless. Reason behind was my job demand me to attend
so
many
calls during my work period and it seems impossible for me to stay here for a longer period.
Meanwhile
could
you
able to find me
a new accommodation
? Actually, I wouldn’t mind if it is less furnished than the
current
one,
but
needs to be a quiet for my work that’s the
only
demanding factor
am
putting
infront
of you. Thank you for your consideration. Yours
faithfully
,
John
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IELTS letter write a letter describing difficulty with accomodation, explain and what kind of accomodatuon you prefer

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
165 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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