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Last Sunday was a great time for you. Write for best friend

Last Sunday was a great time for you. Write for best friend 7aRNn
Dear Janes, It is great to hear from you again. I hope you are still enjoying your job. Last Sunday was my happiest time, both my family and me planned for a surprised birthday party for my mother in the same day evening. It was a fantastic success and now, I am going to share to you. I told my mother we were taking her out for a quiet tonight meal at a local restaurant with just the family, but in fact my dad, young brother and I had hired a large room in a hotel and invited all her old friends. Both we were so excited for this. Well, I have to say my brother was over excited who almost revealed this plan a few times for my mom. Fortunately, she did not find out. By a magical way, I luckily picked my mother up and told her I had changed my mind. We were going to have a meal in a hotel. You should have seen her face when she walked into the room and everyone cheered! She just couldn't believe and burst into tear as soon as my dad gave her favorite flowers. Then the party got going and it didn't finish until midnight. We were absolutely exhausted, but my mother had had a wonderful time. I was really happy due to doing special something to her. Well that is all for you now, Janes. Let me know what you think and catch you on the flip side. Best regards, Cindy Glass
Dear
Janes
,

It is great to hear from you again. I hope you are
still
enjoying your job. Last Sunday was my happiest time, both my family and me planned for a surprised birthday party for my
mother
in the same day evening. It was a fantastic success and
now
, I am going to share to you.

I
told
my
mother
we were taking her out for a quiet tonight meal at a local restaurant with
just
the family,
but
in fact my dad, young brother and I had hired a large room in a hotel and invited all her
old
friends. Both we were
so
excited for this. Well, I
have to
say my brother was over excited who almost revealed this plan a few times for my mom.
Fortunately
, she did not find out.

By a magical way, I luckily picked my
mother
up and
told
her I had
changed
my mind. We were going to have a meal in a hotel. You should have
seen
her face when she walked into the room and everyone cheered! She
just
couldn't believe and burst into tear as
soon
as my dad gave her favorite flowers. Then the party
got
going and it didn't finish until midnight. We were
absolutely
exhausted,
but
my
mother
had had a wonderful time.

I was
really
happy due to doing special something to her.

Well
that is
all for you
now
,
Janes
.
Let
me know what you
think
and catch you on the flip side.

Best regards,

Cindy Glass
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IELTS letter Last Sunday was a great time for you. Write for best friend

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  American English
8 paragraphs
254 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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