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Dear Ann and John, Thanks for the invitation to your birthday party on March 10th. My family was really pleased to receive it and we will definitely go to the party. However, It was convenient for us that the holiday coincided with a day off. As well as we hadn't seen in a long time. This day was an opportunity for us. I hope we have other friends at the party as well and we have a fun time. Thanks again, and see you on the 10th. Love, Emma and David
Dear Ann and John, Thanks for the invitation to your birthday party on March 10th. My family was
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
to receive
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
it and
we will definitely go to the party.
However
, It was convenient for us that the holiday coincided with a day off.
As well
as we hadn't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
in a long time. This day was an opportunity for us. I hope we have other friends at the party as
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
well and
we have a fun time. Thanks again, and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you on the 10th.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Love
, Emma and David
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IELTS letter Write a letter about inviting

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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