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write a formal letter applying for the job

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48/10 Cay Tram, Ward 4, Go Vap Dist, HCMC 29 June, 2015 Director Heart to Heart Charity Office 15 Ha Thanh Street Dear sir or Madam, I am writing for the fob of a volunteer at your Heart To Heart Charity Office. I saw the advertisement on our school notice board last Monday. I have experience of doing office work. Last summer, I had a chance to volunteer at the Happy Mind Charity Centre as a front office worker. There, I received visiting donors and volunteers as well. I am reliable, honest, hard-working and goot at communication. If necessary, I can send you a references from the Director of the Happy Mind Charity Centre. I am available for an interview any day after school or at weekends. If my application is successful, I can start working from next week in the afternoons or at weekends. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfuly, Nguyen Trung Hieu

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June, 2015


Director

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Charity
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Office
 15 Ha Thanh Street Dear sir or Madam,

I am writing for the fob of a volunteer at your Heart To Heart You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
Charity
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Office
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 the advertisement on our school notice board last Monday.

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I
 have experience of doing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 work. Last summer, I had a chance to volunteer at the Happy Mind You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
Charity
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Centre
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I am reliable, honest, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
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send
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a references
 from the Director of the Happy Mind You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfundphilanthropyendowmentdonation
Charity
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Centre
.

I am available for an interview any day after school or at weekends. If my application is successful, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 working from next
 week in the afternoons or at weekends.

I look forward to hearing from you.

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