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letter i regards to suggestio n

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing this letter to add suggestions regarding a Zest park which is near to my house located to the westside Riverdale, Toronto. Allow me to elaborate on the details. The last day was well spent by me and my friends in a park but I noticed that the garbage bins are needed to be changed for the sake of public health and hygiene. The garbage openers were detached and were totally broken. A whole waste was over the opener and around the trash box. This will keep the toddlers away from any diseases who usually spent their evenings in the park and changing those pits will keep the environment fresh and alive. I request you to keep a regular screening on these public properties and will be really grateful if my suggestion as early as possible. Yours truly robin
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing this letter to
add
suggestions regarding a Zest park which is near to my
house
located to the
westside
Riverdale, Toronto.
Allow
me to elaborate on the
details
.

The last day was well spent by me and my friends in a park
but
I noticed that the garbage bins
are needed
to be
changed
for the sake of public health and hygiene. The garbage openers
were detached
and were
totally
broken. A whole waste was over the opener and around the trash box. This will
keep
the toddlers away from any diseases who
usually
spent their evenings in the park and changing those pits will
keep
the environment fresh and alive.

I request you to
keep
a regular screening on these public properties and will be
really
grateful if my suggestion as early as possible.

Yours
truly


robin
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IELTS letter letter i regards to suggestio n

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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