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letter i regards to suggestio n

letter i regards to suggestio n mWpMO

Dear Sir/Madam I am writing this letter to add suggestions regarding a Zest park which is near to my house located to the westside Riverdale, Toronto. Allow me to elaborate on the details. The last day was well spent by me and my friends in a park but I noticed that the garbage bins are needed to be changed for the sake of public health and hygiene. The garbage openers were detached and were totally broken. A whole waste was over the opener and around the trash box. This will keep the toddlers away from any diseases who usually spent their evenings in the park and changing those pits will keep the environment fresh and alive. I request you to keep a regular screening on these public properties and will be really grateful if my suggestion as early as possible. Yours truly robin

Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing this letter to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 suggestions regarding a Zest park which is near to my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 located to the Possible spelling mistake found.Westsidewest side
westside
 Riverdale, Toronto. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Allow
 me to elaborate on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
.

The last day was well spent by me and my friends in a park This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I noticed that the garbage bins are needed
 to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 for the sake of public health and hygiene. The garbage openers were detached
 and were totally
 broken. A whole waste was over the opener and around the trash box. This will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the toddlers away from any diseases who usually
 spent their evenings in the park and changing those pits will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the environment fresh and alive.

I request you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 a regular screening on these public properties and will be really
 grateful if my suggestion as early as possible.

Yours truly


robin