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Write a letter for Plans for a new airport

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing regarding plans for building new airport near Prishtina’s most iconic and largest neighborhood. Last week, this is main news on television and other online medias, due to the fact that this is biggest capital investment ever done in capital city. Indeed, there are a lot of discussions about advantages of this project, also economic benefits that we could receive. Meanwhile, we inhabitants who live in this area are very concerned about the noises and air pollution that will cause airplanes. I would like to suggest locality displacement about 20 kilometers further in south-eastern area. That part is barely populated and all mentioned drawbacks will have less impact. Also, there are better conditions for a road infrastructure to avoid our actual urban heavy traffic. We would be very grateful if you consider this letter and inform us by the end of the month. Your faithfully, Afrim Syla
Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing regarding plans for building new airport near
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Prishtina
’s most iconic and largest neighborhood. Last week, this is main news on television and other online medias, due to the fact that this is
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biggest
capital investment ever done in capital city.

Indeed
, there are
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a lot of
discussions about advantages of this project,
also
economic benefits that we could receive. Meanwhile,
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we inhabitants
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in this area are
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very
concerned about the noises and air pollution that will cause airplanes.

I would like to suggest locality displacement about 20 kilometers
further
in south-eastern area. That part is
barely
populated and all mentioned drawbacks will have less impact.
Also
, there are better conditions for a road infrastructure to avoid our actual urban heavy traffic.

We would be
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very
grateful if you consider this letter and inform us by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the month.

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Your
faithfully
,

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Afrim
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Syla
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IELTS letter Write a letter for Plans for a new airport

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6 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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