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Complain letter about a restourant

Complain letter about a restourant Wg2yN

Dear Sir I am a usual customer of your restourant nearly for 5 years. I used to consume the meals of your resrourant, but last 3 times I noticed that the test of the meal changed a bit. About it I warned a few times your waitress, but they did not accept my complain. Yesterday I was in your shop once more, she served me some sulty meal and I asked thet they should chanege the meal, although I warned them that time they bring me some burned dish. I could not know what to do. Surely I informed her once more but she showed me her rude behaviour with mumbling. She even demanded money for her unsutsfied dish, I had to pay the amount, becouse iI had some guests with me. As you consentrate I was such a shameful situation at my guests. I look forward to you will take prompt action for the situation, and you can return my payment as soon as possible. Otherwise I will have to take legal action. Your sencerly James Bond

Dear Sir

I am a usual customer of your Possible spelling mistake found.restaurant
restourant
nearly
 for 5 years. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to consume the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfaresnackpicnicdessertfeastrefreshment
meals
 of your Possible spelling mistake found.restaurant
resrourant
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 last 3 times I noticed that the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evaluate
test
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfaresnackpicnicdessertfeastrefreshment
meal
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 a bit. About Consider adding a comma here.it,
it
 I warned a few times your waitress, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they did not accept my The word 'complain' is a verb. Did you mean the noun "complaint"?complaint
complain
. Yesterday I was in your shop once more, she served me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
Possible spelling mistake found.saltysiltysultrysulkysullysuety
sulty
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfaresnackpicnicdessertfeastrefreshment
meal
 and I asked Possible spelling mistake found.thethatthentheythemthee
thet
 they should Possible spelling mistake found.change
chanege
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfaresnackpicnicdessertfeastrefreshment
meal
, although I warned them that time they bring me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 burned dish. I could not know what to do. Surely
 I informed her once more This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 me her rude Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviour' is British English.behavior
behaviour
 with mumbling. She even demanded money for her Possible spelling mistake found.unsatisfied
unsutsfied
 dish, I had to pay the amount, Possible spelling mistake found.because
becouse
Possible spelling mistake found.iiinisIitif
iI
 had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 guests with me. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 you Possible spelling mistake found.concentrateconsent rate
consentrate
 I was such a shameful situation at my guests.

I look forward to you will take prompt action for the situation, and you can return my payment as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Otherwise,
Otherwise
 I will This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 take legal action.

Your Possible spelling mistake found.sincerelytenderly
sencerly
 James Bond

IELTS letter Complain letter about a restourant

Letter

American English

3 paragraphs

177 words

5.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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