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tell about yourself: name, age, hometown

tell about yourself: name, age, hometown m8x6d
hello everybody, my name's Nhu. But you can call me Eyrrian. Because i like it. i'm 18 years old and i'm single. i was born and raised in Quang Binh province, and the food here is very delicious. In parrticular, there is also a famous place here. it's Phong Nha-Ke Bang National Park. My family has 4 people: mom, dad, younger brother and me. My parents are teachers so i wanna be a teacher like my mom. now i'm a freshman of primary education at Quang Binh univercity. And i hope that in the future i will dedicate myself to education. My hobbies are surfing the Internet, listening to music, i like many kinds of music. Oh, and especially, i really like read novel books before going to bed. it's a my habit. I think i'm a friendly person. so yeah, thank you for watching
hello
everybody, my name's
Nhu
.
But
you can call me
Eyrrian
.
Because
i
like it.
i'm
18 years
old
and
i'm
single.
i
was born
and raised in
Quang
Binh
province, and the food here is
very
delicious. In
parrticular
, there is
also
a
famous
place here.
it
's
Phong
Nha-Ke
Bang National Park. My family has 4
people
: mom, dad, younger brother and me. My parents are teachers
so
i
wanna
be a teacher like my mom.
now
i'm
a freshman of primary education at
Quang
Binh
univercity
. And
i
hope that in the future
i
will dedicate myself to education. My hobbies are surfing the Internet, listening to music,
i
like
many
kinds of music. Oh, and
especially
,
i
really
like read novel books
before
going to bed.
it
's
a my habit
. I
think
i'm
a friendly person.
so
yeah, thank you for
watching
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IELTS letter tell about yourself: name, age, hometown

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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