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what do you think of fast food?

what do you think of fast food? Wg63q

I suppose it’s very popular. It has many advantages. Fast food is good for busy people or commuters. It’s fasly, convienient. We can go to the restaurant and order, after paying money, we can easily get a meal with a variety of dishes. There a lot of brands of fast food like: KFC, McDonald’s, Burger King, . . and we can have many choices to eat Still, fast food is really not good for health and you know, fast food has very fatty substance, that make be harmful, become overweight or obese. Moreover, it’s very expensive, as fast food is a popular dish in the west, so in VN, its prices are higher than Vietnamese dishes ‘s prices.

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