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Apology for bed behaviour

Apology for bed behaviour 6KybK
Dear my friend. I am writting to apologies for bed behaviour. Please accept my sincerest apologies for bed behaviour. This condation in school on the saturday. He knows this condation. In school i speak bed words your mather. This condation I do not what speak. I apology for you and for mather. You speak bed words in my mather and and I do not an happy. Because mother is gold. I am sorry to hear about bad behavior. You give me your mother phone namber, I apology your mather. Your mather apology me or do not apology I kill me. Becaus mother is gold, gold, gold. I am apology you and your mather. My friend you. I respect you. I apology again for bed behavior. I understand your disappoinment and truly sorry. I can assurre you that this mistake will never be repeated in the future. Ihope you will accept my apology. Your faithfull Akramov Ma'rufjon.
Dear my friend. I am
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writting
to
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apologies
for
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bed
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behaviour
.
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Please
accept my sincerest
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apologies
for
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bed
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behaviour
. This
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condation
in school on the
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saturday
. He knows this
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condation
. In school
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i
speak
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bed
words your
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mather
. This
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condation
I do not what speak. I
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apology
for you and for
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mather
. You speak
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bed
words in my
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mather
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and and
I do not
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an happy
.
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Because
mother is gold. I am sorry to hear about
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bad
behavior. You give me your mother phone
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namber
, I
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apology
your
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mather
. Your
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mather
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apology
me or do not
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apology
I kill me.
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Becaus
mother is gold, gold, gold. I am
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apology
you and your
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mather
. My friend you. I respect you. I
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apology
again for
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bed
behavior.
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I
understand your
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disappoinment
and
truly
sorry.
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I
can
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assurre
you that this mistake will never
be repeated
in the future.
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Ihope
you will accept my
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apology
. Your
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faithfull
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Akramov
Ma'
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rufjon
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IELTS letter Apology for bed behaviour

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
156 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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