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What are the advantages and disadvantages of keeping pets?

What are the advantages and disadvantages of keeping pets? dDgOP
It is stated that, there are a plethora of merits and demerits in keeping a pet. But what tops the chart is that keeping a pet can aid us in curing mental issues. this is without doubt beneficial because pets assist us in depleting stress level. A case in point may be that the psychlogists advise people who have mental issues to keep a pet. It can help them to improve their quality of life. On the other hand, there are a number of demerits in keeping a pet. But it goes without saying that owning a pet can be dangerous if you have small kids, because pets are unpredictable and sometimes do actions that can result in damaged to kids. in conclusion, There are some negatives of keeping a pet. However, if the owner observe the safety point, it can bring huge benefits to the owner.
It
is stated
that, there are a plethora of merits and demerits in keeping a pet.
But
what tops the chart is that keeping a pet can aid us in curing mental issues.
this
is without doubt beneficial
because
pets
assist us in depleting
stress
level. A case in point may be that the
psychlogists
advise
people
who have mental issues to
keep
a pet. It can
help
them to
improve
their quality of life.
On the other hand
, there are a number of demerits in keeping a pet.
But
it goes without saying that owning a pet can be
dangerous
if you have
small
kids,
because
pets
are unpredictable and
sometimes
do actions that can result in damaged to kids.
in
conclusion, There are
some
negatives of keeping a pet.
However
, if the owner observe the safety point, it can bring huge benefits to the owner.
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