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Write a letter you invite to party

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Dear Andy Thank you for the kind invitation which I could be honoroud to accept to your birthday party on 19th. Furthmore, I was extremely contented to receive your invitation and I desire to come. It is lucky for me that you chose the 19th actually, as it is the only day of that week that I am free. What is more, It is been such a long time since I have seen each other so it will be great to get together and catch up on all the news. The most crucial that music is organized. Also, it will be recreation for me. Please let me know if there is anything I can bring or anything I can do to assist. Yours sincerly, Lucy
Dear Andy

Thank you for the kind invitation which I could be
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honoroud
to accept to your birthday party on 19th.

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Furthmore
, I was
extremely
contented to receive your invitation and I desire to
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come
. It is lucky for me that you chose the 19th actually, as it is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
day of that week that I am free.

What is more
, It
is been
such a long time since I have
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seen
each other
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so
it will be great to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
together and catch up on all the news.

The most crucial that music
is organized
.
Also
, it will be recreation for me.

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Please
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let
me know if there is anything I can bring or anything I can do to assist.

Yours
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sincerly
,

Lucy
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IELTS letter Write a letter you invite to party

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
124 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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